Week 7 Blog Reviews

Group 1 Blog Reviews

Aubrie Rach

Your “Is Monogamy the Key?” post was full of information. You had a fulfilling amount of facts as well as commentary. It was also well constructed with perfect manner. Your last paragraph really set across your entire point for the post and was well concluded with a great sense of closure!

I also really enjoyed reading your post about what college you were deciding at the time to go to. Let me just say that you picked the best college, :)! Now back to the academics! I thought your post was well constructed as well. You were able to tell the story and back it up with facts from the reading in a manner that was easy to follow. Great job!

Krista Sigala

I really liked your intro paragraph on your “cheating” blog post. It got straight to the point without any excess facts and commentary. I also like how you introduced what evolutionary psychology was as well because not most people know that off the top of their head.

Your other post “You Aren’t Listening!” was full of information. You did a good job summarizing the reading as well. I also enjoy your vocabulary usage… it’s not just everyday words but more intriguing which makes the writing seem much more professional. Awesome job!

Monique Perez

In your post, “Saving Monogamous Marriages” the citations were a bit off. Professor Patel explained how since we all know what book we are using we should just cite with the author of the actual essay you are basing your post on. So for this case, instead of using the author of the entire book as a whole, use Buss, the author of the essay you evaluated! I was definitely confused at first too when it came to citing our posts! But all in all, the entire post was great. I really like how you pointed out how we all believe in our own fairy tales. Not everything is a fairy tale, and you’re right, we do go into relationships thinking everything is going to perfect when in reality we need to work on them. Great post overall!

First off, I’m so jealous you’re going on vacation soon! Your writing had great information in it, however, I thought it might’ve been a little bit easier to follow if you followed your story with facts from the reading as in to why your spouse did what he did in the argument you guys had. Instead, I almost had to reference back to what the story was about in the previous paragraph. But other than that everything else was amazing and you had great posts!