Overall you had great posts! They were all very lengthy full with good facts as well as commentary. Length was not a problem at all, so I do not think you should have any problem whatsoever with finding a post to evolve from for your final project!
Your very first post I thought was well-written. It was lengthy, but in a good way. You had some great comments that were backed up with facts. Overall it was interesting. You also had very few grammatical errors! The same thing goes for your second post! I was intrigued with your insight!
The post “Bring Monogamy Back!” on October 12 was also another great post. I felt like you wrote with confidence in what you were writing. Your commentary proved that you knew what you were talking about. There was also hardly any grammar issues! This I think would also be another great post to evolve from, because by how you wrote it seemed as if it was something of your interest and I think that would help you to create a successful essay!
I also thought the post “Material Girl in a Material World” was another post that you seemed to show some interest in. I think it was another great post that was full of good information throughout the entire thing. Also, the post after that, “Immigration and the Economy Weed out the Selfish People” was interesting was well. You took a great approach in how to write it. Both posts overall were overall really well written!
Great job on all of your posts! You are an awesome writer and will have no problem on your final project! Good luck and I hope my critiques have helped somewhat!
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