Week 12 Blog Reviews

Group 2 Peer Reviews

Brittany

Both of your posts did not show up again on your blog. They were there, but they just had “…” as the body. You might want to fix that!


Monique

In your “We Need Government Structure!” post, I’d first off, like to 100% agree with you. We were both on the same exact stance on this subject but it was again, really cool to see another person’s insights on the topic. It’s true; the only real logical explanation of having a nation without a government to control what we are able to do, then our crime rates would SKYROCKET! No doubt! So yes, I agree, our laws WERE made for a reason and not in a negative way either! All in all, I also agree and believe that it is good to have a stable nation by having some sort of government structure. This post was well written, you had a lot of good comments and points throughout the entire thing, and I didn’t catch any errors whatsoever!

In your second post for the week, “Finance and Numbers,” I loved your intro paragraph. Not only was it well written, but it was full of facts but still to the point. It clearly introduced the topic for the day. You took a great path on how to construct your post while clearly answering the prompt. Good writings for the week!