Week 10 Blog Reviews

Group 3 Blog Reviews

Brittany

I enjoyed reading your “Clean Lyrics: Making Hip Hop Lame” post. You have probably already noticed that I am also a hip-hop fan. I completely agree with you, hip-hop is lame when it’s edited. I find myself getting mad when I accidentally download the wrong version of a song. You would never think that profanity would really make a difference, but it does, because that’s just how hip-hop artists express themselves. I enjoyed seeing someone write about the same thing, but just with a different perspective.

Wow, your “Crash” story was pretty intense. I’m glad to hear that everything was okay with Nancie and her mom. Your writing was pretty deep and you used a good “eerie” tone like the prompt suggests. Great writing!

Monique

We both had pretty much the same exact views about the music industry, but you still had different points so it was interesting to see what you had to say. Overall, your writing was put together very well, however, I found a few grammatical errors. Nothing too big though because it was a great post and full of information!

I’m sorry to hear about your grandpa! I’m glad to hear he is alright though, but that is completely absurd of Peter Piper Pizza to treat you and your family that way. It’s a shame how some people honestly have no feelings whatsoever. Being a nursing major, it’s frustrating to really hear about how some people can be so rude and have no sympathy, but hey that’s just how the world is I guess! Anyways, your post was great, however you had a few grammatical errors, but nothing too big again. You had an immense amount of good details as well, making it overall a good post. Good job!